Hunger and Satisfaction (Poem)

Making homemade bread

is like love.

You put your heart 

and soul into it 

taking a chance 

willing to give it a try.

When you mix 

the right ingredients,

and it comes out 

perfectly,

the aroma of homemade bread

is enticing 

to your palate, your face

glows with 

excitement and happiness.

That is the same way 

when you're in love.

You know it is just right.

 

(C) Noreen Ann Snyder 

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    RainbowKid
    48. It doesn't rhyme. It's a paragraph with extra lines 🤔
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      Noreen Snyder
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      Thank you very much for your feedback! Not all poetry rhymes. This is a free verse poem. There are over 168 poetry forms.
  • Priyansh Jhanji
    Nice one man !
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      Noreen Snyder
      Author
      Thank you very much, Priyansh!
  • geraldzunyga
    Thanks Noreen for sharing. I liked reading it.
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      Noreen Snyder
      Author
      Awwww, you are very welcome, Gerald! I'm glad you liked reading it. This means a lot to me.
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    Roy Rogers
    Thank you for that. Looking forward to more.
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      Noreen Snyder
      Author
      You are very welcome! I'm looking forward to share more of my poetry.